Dean5339, Story credit to Kittsbud
EXT. ATLANTIC OCEAN (GIVING IN BY LINKIN PARK)
ATLANTIC OCEAN… OFF THE COAST OF MIAMI
We travel through the water as we come upon a small fishing boat “The Seagrass”. The radio BOOMS the song Giving In by Linkin Park. Teenagers party on the boat, drinking beer, having fun. We see the wind pick up speed. KYLE, 19 years old, surfer guy, holds a video camera looking around.
POV. VIDEO CAMERA
We see through the video camera. It is pointed at JAMAL, 19 years old, and his girlfriend, TERESA, dancing to the music. Jamal looks into the camera
Hey, get that stupid thing out of my face…
Wo relax, just having a little fun dude.
Annoy somebody else for a change…
Kyle aims the video camera towards Teresa’s ass.
Lookin’ great, Teresa; a little more bounce in the step though…
Teresa stops moving.
Jamal YANKS the camera out of Kyle’s hand. GWEN, 18 years old, blonde cheerleader type laughs, leaning against the boat.
Hey!!! Come on man, it was finally getting good for a change.
Jamal holds up the camera
This, this is mine.
Kyle laughs and shakes his head no
The ship suddenly rocks hard back and forth. They struggle to stay on. Teresa looks towards Jamal, he nods. Gwen looks towards Kyle, afraid.
I thought you said the weather was going to be good?!
Yeah, so mind telling me what the heck is goin’ on?
Kyle looks around. SPLASH! The boat is rocked again.
What the hell!
This is totally not cool.
Kyle climbs up to the top of the control deck and looks out.
Um… you probably might want to come up here and take a look at this.
Jamal frowns and climbs up. He looks towards Kyle.
What is it?
Kyle nods towards the water, the rising waves coming right towards them! The radio begins to fade to STATIC. We hear a feminine singing voice, a harmonious tune. Eerie. Enchanting. Mesmerizing. Kyle smiles as he walks further and further along the upper deck. The waves approach them at a more rapid pace. Jamal turns Kyle around.
We have to get out of here!!!
Kyle shakes his head no and grins, almost as though lost in a trance.
No. She’s coming.
Jamal looks out towards the waves and back towards Kyle.
Alright, fine you stay here. I’ll go save our asses.
Jamal turns around to leave. Kyle GRABS his arm and spins him around.
Man, what’s your problem!!!
I love her.
Jamal struggles to get free. He looks into the wave and for a second we see a female figure coming out of it, composed completely of water! This is a SIREN. The Siren holds out her hand and beckons for Kyle to join her.
She wants me.
Kyle lets go of Jamal and walks further towards the edge and stares up as the waves approach him. The Siren reaches out and GRABS him. Jamal watches, horrified.
Now that’s messed up.
THUMP! Kyle drops back down. Eyes open. Pale skin. Gurgling water and blood. Jamal backs away.
What the hell?!
Hey, baby what is going on up there?
The waves SPLASH over the Seagrass, drowning the boat under its currents. The waves stop. Everything is calm, tranquil. We PAN OVER the boat, everyone is dead.
EXT. MIAMI- BEACH (SURFIN USA BY THE BEACH BOYS)
TWO WEEKS LATER...
We open to surfers controlling the living waves. On the beach, hot teenage girls wearing bikinis pass by the screen. Young couples sit along the sand. Next to the beach is a news stand.
So, you still didn't tell me what we are doing…
We track Sam and Dean walking along the beach.
Dean stops and picks up a tabloid.
We came because of an article in the tabloids? Dean, you know as well as I do- most of that stuff is made up for entertainment purposes.
Yeah, well it’s not the infamous Bat Boy I’m interested in.
Dean flips the tabloid to an article titled LOST AT SEA.
A couple of days ago, a fishing boat that was supposedly lost was found. All of the crew was on the ship: Dead.
I still don’t see how…
All died of the exact same thing. They drowned to death. Salt water in their lungs. Now tell me, how on earth could they all have drowned to death on seemingly dry land?
So, what do you think caused it?
Sirens? I thought that was just a legend.
Yeah, well it’s not. Sirens exist and have existed for many years.
According to legends, Sirens attack ships approaching their island of Sirenum scopuli.
Yeah, but Odysseus and Jason and the Argonauts aside, sailors have reported seeing strange looking feminine forms in the water for years now; especially in and around the region of the Atlantic Ocean just off of Miami.
Through the power of their voice alone, they’re able to draw men to its will, towards their deaths.
Not that much different from real life, actually.
Sam laughs and nods
Dean, for how long have you been 'hunting' this thing?
Dean thinks about it and shrugs.
A while now, figured it was finally time for us to come down here and check it out for ourselves.
Sam nods okay.
So, how are we going to find this thing?
Honestly? I don’t know. But, I arranged a meeting with a local Miami University professor. Hopefully he can clear everything up.
Dean and Sam climb up the steps towards the Metro station above.
INT. METRO STATION- MAIN
Dean stops at the ticket booth.
The tickets come through and Dean takes them.
INT. METRO STATION- DEPARTING PLATFORM
Dean and Sam wait along the departing platform.
INT. METRO STATION- MAIN
HAYLEY COLLINS runs through the ticket register, ignoring the security guards.
Excuse me miss, you can’t go through there!
INT. METRO STATION- DEPARTING PLATFORM
Dean checks his watch.
Should be here any second now
Hayley runs through the deporting deck and bumps into Sam, she almost trips. Sam reaches out and helps her.
Haley looks back towards Sam, flips her hair back and smiles
You in a hurry?
Huh? Oh, yeah…
Sam nods and extends his hand
Well, great meeting you Hayley.
So, you live around here or?
Just passing through.
The monorail train arrives. Dean clears his throat.
Come on Sam, its here. Time to go.
Well, it was good meeting you.
Sam and Dean approach the monorail train.
No!!! Wait, stop!
Sam and Dean turn around, surprised.
Don’t get on.
Sam approaches her
Why? What is it?
Hayley’s eyes dart and back. Not knowing what to say, who would believe her.
The… train, it’s going to crash.
It’s s going to crash, it’s going to collide. Please just don’t get on.
This isn’t your way of saying you want a phone number right? Because we can just give it to you and make it on time, we have an important…
Hayley shakes her head no startled, Sam looks towards Dean and frowns. He comforts Hayley.
Hey, everything will be ok.
Hayley nods, holding onto Sam. Dean watches, grins- was he seeing this right? His brother becoming a…
Please, don’t get on.
Sam looks into her eyes.
Dean frowns, he looks back towards the monorail train as it departs.
I’m telling you, nothing is going to happen.
CRASH!!!! ERRING! We hear the rails SCREECHING. People screaming. Dean looks towards Sam, mouth agape- surprised. He looks towards Hayley, she also looks surprised; even more so, terrified. They run off.
INT. MONORAIL TRAIN- PASSENGER DECK
Inside we see people screaming, panicked. Some of the passengers have been seriously injured in the crash. We quickly TRAVEL BACK through the windows and out into…
EXT. METRO STATION
Dean, Sam and Hayley join the observers of the scene. They stare up towards the monorail.
We look up towards the collision. Two trains against each other at a distorted angle. Each leaning over and on the verge of tipping over and back out onto the street! People look out the window screaming.
EXT. METRO STATION
Dean gulps. He looks towards Sam, Sam nods. Hayley stares into space. Dean clears his throat.
You told us the train was going to crash- how did you know?
I, I don’t know. I… I saw it.
Dean shakes his head no, not believing her.
You said that the train was going to crash. How did you know that?
I told you, I don’t know!!!! This, everything is all knew to me.
Dean looks towards Sam, he frowns. Sam shrugs. Dean laughs and shakes his head yes. Of course Sam would take her side, as he thought earlier. Somewhere in the time they first met Hayley, Sam became her “boy toy” to tote around. Dean looks up towards the train. Something obviously wasn’t right about this.